The rush…
Extremely potent, like the feel of water racing round my ears.
I’m drowning in desire want so bad to draw near.
The smell is penetrating, goes very deep within.
Lost in the fragrance, I can barely begin.
Closer.
Maybe I can feel with my fingertips
what my mouth wants to swallow.
Settling.
Fleeting graze ‘gainst my lips;
it’s timidity leaving me hollow
Brazenly cupping, feels lush in my hand.
The bud, surrendering, seems unusually grand.
Tracing circles on the outside; wishing to mesh.
Those inside petals almost better than flesh.
unga bunga girl 
Beautifully written. I loved it. It bought a sense of a combination of Summer and Spring.
Thank you. It was inspired by those seasons and what they bring forth.
flowers are definitely prettier than humans 🙂
nice.
Ha, they come in more vibrant colors too :). Thanks.
I loved this.
Thanks, I was trying something different.
Lost in the fragrance, I can barely begin.
Nice line…
Thank you. I like that line too.
I love this,
You tease us delightfully with the erotic nature of your words and then make us smile with the picture of the flower 🙂
Quite brilliant
David
Hey David,
You got me. I was teasing and trying for a double meaning. Nature arouses me. Sometimes I wish I could you know what it.
Thanks,
Cathy
Sometimes your words are so elequent, I feel like a retarted cavewoman, should I try to leave a comment. This is one of those times. Really poweful. Liked!
Oh, you are pretty eloquent yourself. I just do it in 20 lines or less because I truly am lazy. Thank you!
Holy misdirection, Batman! Really brilliant! I really enjoyed this.
I’m glad you liked it. I’m so happy the misdirection came across.
This is brilliant. Your description of the scent arouses in me powerful emotions 🙂 well done.
Thank you very much!